An oceans heart
Tears fallin on sunny shores
deep into the ocean lye cried out hearts.
Softly crashing against each other.
Washing emotions up onto the sand.
deep into the ocean lye cried out hearts.
Softly crashing against each other.
Washing emotions up onto the sand.
mandy williams
This is my favorite poem since it talk about how beautiful the ocean is and how enjoyable also.
The metaphor in the poem is interesting. You can really see the ocean and how it relates to a heart.
ReplyDeleteIt gives great imagery! Do you like this poem the best because you're a swimmer?
ReplyDeleteThe imagery in metaphor is very interesting and creatively crafted!
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